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I wrote this small poem for the eyes of my besht cousin ~biya...
It was my first ever poetry... :) so... here it goes


What these eyes do
touch everyone’s heart for sure
what it feels like to me
they make the hearts to beat

What these eyes do
look so beautiful and pure
wherever they look
they make it really sweet

What these eyes do
make everything to lure
what they search for
a love that can never cheat

What these eyes do
griefs and sorrows may cure
wherever they stare
make all the dirt really neat

What these eyes do
touch everyone’s heart for sure
what it feels like to me
they make the hearts to beat

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:icongraphicalx:
umm, im not so good when it comes to poetry ^^;

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tis me - graphicalx
:iconhsni:
no probs...
am not good too!

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chaa gaya hy fit hy


ab khussh main bhee kucch deviations charha raha hunn un per comment dy aur haan aur kon c nayee charhayee hy

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Suly :dance:
:iconhsni:
:hug: thnkooo

the new ones are
Dazzling Turmoil
Dazzling Turmoil YG
and
Frosty :D

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- h s n i - :headbang:
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:iconbiya:
And here is Biya :)

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-beeyA- :party:
:iconhsni:
par ab biya ban gai kissi ki pia :|
lol... ;P

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i did read it...but was short of time....
:$
hmmmmz
so here i go...

your cousin surely means alot to you....that was a nice way to express
:)
cute

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Flames to dust...lovers to friends....
Why do all good things come to an end?
:bye:
:iconhsni:
ya she means alot to me... she is my best cousin! :)

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- h s n i - :headbang:
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:iconnonee:
happy friendship!
:)

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Flames to dust...lovers to friends....
Why do all good things come to an end?
:bye:

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